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1.情境微写作:你走在路上,寒风呼啸,你该如何描写寒冷的场景?(比喻)

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正确答案: ['
The icy wind is howling, and it cuts my face like a sharp knife. / The icy wind is howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.
']
解析:
题目要求我们用比喻的修辞手法描写走在路上的寒冷的场景,我们可以从寒风入手,将呼啸的寒风比喻成刀子。因此可以写为:The icy wind is howling, and it cuts my face like a sharp knife. 句中使用and连接了两个并列句。同样我们也可以写为:The icy wind is howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife. 这里cutting my face like a sharp knife是现在分词作状语。

省流:[['
The icy wind is howling, and it cuts my face like a sharp knife. / The icy wind is howling, cutting my face like a sharp knife.
']]
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2.情境微写作:夜晚,你在床上正要入睡,突然听到窗外有人喊你,你要去窗边,又不想惊动身边熟睡的妹妹,此时你会怎么做?(slip:悄悄地走;tiptoe:踮着脚走)

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正确答案: ['
I put on my coat quietly, slipped out of the bed and tiptoed to the window.
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解析:
根据题目语境可知我们需要进行一系列动作描写,描述从床上到窗边的过程,此时可以使用动作链,写为:I put on my coat quietly, slipped out of the bed and tiptoed to the window. 这里连续使用了slip,put on以及tiptoe三个动作,并且使用了副词quietly,形象生动地描绘了“我”小心翼翼走到窗边的过程。

省流:[['
I put on my coat quietly, slipped out of the bed and tiptoed to the window.
']]
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